Feedback Output Packet 3
Associate: Jaclyn Saorsail
Main Advisor:  Ariane Burgess
Date: 150102

Hi Jacki, 

Thank you for the opportunity to review your OP3. I learned more about you, your thinking and your perspectives and learning about communication. I learned about lots of great tools for group dynamics and communication and I was nourished in my own process around exploring the underlying currents in human interaction. I thoroughly enjoyed reviewing  this OP. 

How to use the FB and PoDAPO documents. 
I have written this Feedback document as well as graded and commented in the PoDAPO. As a result there may be a bit of repetition here and there - although for the most part the PoDAPO comments are related directly to the PoDAPO criteria whereas this document is generated from my own responses to reviewing your OP3. 

Is the OP complete? Yes
	
Highlight – your learning about giving and supporting others while on your own mission - great work and generosity here. 

General – a well put together, clear OP - with all the bits in place. 

Potential for change - 
The content in the Core Report and the Outcomes was a bit repetitious - for example I already learned about your setting up of RegenerativeDynamics.org in the Core Report and then you talk about it again in the Project Outcomes. 

I like the summing up aspect in the Project Outcomes - as that is you acknowledging your outcomes for yourself - however you also to it a bit in the core report. 

And while I like the summing up paragraphs at the end of each section in the Core Report and your Learning/Unlearning sections I wonder if some of that could be moved into the Outcomes pages?

Questions that came up for me
What would happen if you chose to make a conscious intervention - articulated what it was, make the intervention and stay with it - to watch what the impact is. You could do this in the Lab or other areas - even your personal life. 

You are doing it - however I don’t see evidence of you articulating it and then doing it and then observing for the impact. 

Output element > in detail comments

OP3 Tabs: 
Introduction
Specification
	This Specification was good. Providing a clear frame for people wanting to engage with your work. It was helpful for me to - as although I am your MA and reviewed OP2 that was in 2013 and so this helped me get right to where you are focusing. 

I like your clear three phase process structure. 

Word Count - great that you have this now. And that you have a sense of the count for moving towards for the next OP. That’s a skill - to convey what you want to others within a word count. 

Core Report
Goals & Skillflexes - superb - clear articulation of goals - I can see what you were wanting to achieve and or develop from doing the project. 

Various project / event threads - good - succinct report - enough for me to get the gist of your experience. I like your mini skill flex development paragraph at the end of each one. I trust this is helpful for you to see what you are accomplishing / gaining a yield for everything you are doing. 

Learnings/Unlearnings - here I get to see where you’re growing and that you see it too. Love the comments about your confidence in communication - by giving to others. As well as the opportunities for facilitation that have come your way. 

You are consciously choosing to make contact and collaborate with other people and lots of good things are coming from this. 

I really like your self assessment snapshot Skillflex chart you have under the Democracy Project - look forward to seeing how this develops from one op to the next - and then how you go on to expand for each skill flex in your Learnings/Unlearning. You are really taking me along with your process and development of these particular threads. 

New Goals - and now I can see clearly what your next achievable steps are. For the next OP you could articulate a clear intervention you want to make to further your development in some or all of these areas.  

You’ve demonstrated clearly here how you don’t have to have a project that has a beginning and end for an OP. 

Outcomes
Personal
I’m touched to read how you have found new community and friends and are beginning to fulfil your purpose - I sense your inner world is in a very different place than it was in 2013. Hooray. It’s also exciting that the place you’ve found your incubator space is also offering you opportunities for your spiritual development. Here’s to your acting even more positively in the world Jacki!

Professional
It’s great that you have consciously set out to grow your network and it’s giving you a great harvest
- after all most of what we want to do in life occurs through relationship with others. 

Project
Life is like a treasure hunt - need an incubator space - get out there and connect with people it will show up soon… 

Great work on combining different apps to create the collaborative online space you want. 
You have also shared your knowledge with the communities you are connecting with and wanting to integrate. 

Peer 
It looks like you are having a beneficial impact with your peers and that you are making important and useful contributions to their lives/work.

Patrix
This is a great statement - “I want to spread this to make starting a regenerative business as realistic as getting a college degree” 

Supporting Evidence
A very useful page for other people working on similar threads - both in books to read and people they might connect with too. 

It was also good to be able to dip into your Journals and connect with some of your inner world and some of the things that have happened in your journey to re-locate to Colorado. Sorry to hear about your bike accident and glad to hear you are ok. 

Annotated Resource Reviews
This is a very thorough and useful resource page - that Associates would benefit from being able to see. 

Process Reflections
Output Packet Design 
Great to see that you are becoming aware of the iterative process of OP production and how things get better. I’m wondering why you chose not to put the design framework on this page rather than the first. 

How I Integrated Feedback
Good to see that you have taken immediate feedback from the Peer Review of this OP. 
Great insight that your next OP may answer some of what seems fuzzy at the moment. 

Digiphon
I’m so glad to see that you have an automatic back up system - show’s you value all the time and effort you are putting into the work you are doing. 
What do you use to take photos with. Consider making this just a list - easier for an Associate to quickly see what it is you’ve used to accomplish something. 

Final Reflections
Great that you are getting used to sharing when things may not appear perfect to you - this is a rapid prototyping edge that we all need to walk as feedback into the system is essential for regenerative development. 
What internal shift do you need to make to meet the people who will be your partners?

Desktop Kanban Board
I love that you’ve found a tool - learned in Leaders Lab - that you’ve honed so it works for you. 
Do you know KanbanFlow.com? May be too complex. I really like the simplicity of your system. 

Done Record
Good to see that you are tracking everything so thoroughly. 

Interventions and Transformations
Great interventions / transformations. I talk about interventions and ask you to articulate them in the PoDAPO - in this case I’m thinking more on the level of a specific skill flex you want to develop rather than what I take this to be - more meta interventions. 

Time and Commitment Management	
1 & 2nd paragraph - good to read all that has happened - not so sure so much information is necessary in this section - some of it might be better in the appendices - more like journal material?

Pareto Principle realisation is great - that will be an amazing skill to accomplish a lot in 2-3hours. 
Great that you are getting things scheduled and Kanban appears to be becoming one of your hard wired organisational tool.
You appear to have a strong self-motivational / self-accountable streak - which is a great gift for the project you are working on realising. 

Pathway Review
	Consider moving this before Supporting Evidence - it is good to see the comparison and also so see where you are on the Timeline and how it has changed. Great awareness that it may well change again. 

Evaluation  

Review Self 
Areas you marked 2.5/2.95 on Self Review: (and I note your comments about why)
Editing, shape, size - 2.95 - due to 1000 words over. 

You’ve given yourself high marks across much of the PoDAPO skill flex areas. Out of all of them which are the top five that you would really like to develop -regardless of the grade you gave yourself?