http://portfolios.gaiauniversity.org/view/view.php?t=0AgicbnQSIHqErJtR3ZB
 
Specifications and abstract
 
Wow sounds like an incredible resource you are creating!
Great notes for reviewers and introduction to Gaia U
 
Designing my OP
 
Fantastic ambitious goal RE taking your work more worldwide 
Great that you are more consciously documenting your work during the process, not just after
Also great that you are collaborating internationally 
I have totally found grant applications are a kind of design process in themselves 
Promise of funding and clear deadline - yes, these are definite motivators! 
 
Project Descriptions
 
Sounds like a brilliant goal to influence people in allied fields 
 
Project Design 
 
Very clear overview
I personally struggle with mindmap images and much prefer the embedded maps so that you can zoom in
Can you share a little more about the project? Any examples/beta models we can play with? 
 
Outcomes and conclusions 
 
Greater depth about personal outcomes would be great so that the reviewer can evaluate your personal development
Likewise with professional development. What skill flexes have you cultivated? 
The political and patrix effects is a bit ‘light’ 
A conclusion generally serves to summarise to the reader your main points. How can you develop yours? 
 
Commentary 
 
Brilliant that you have developed your four-hour system to focus on Gaia U work 
Great about the decluttering. It can be so therapeutic to let go of projects that are no longer working for us. 
Can you include a link to your MoY presentation? Or notes from your calls? 
 
Supporting Evidence CFFI Project content
 
Nice to see the logo, perhaps this could be included in the core report as a way to make it more visually stimulating? 
Fab grant proposal!
I can see now you have included more info about the project in your supporting evidence. Maybe include a hyperlink in the core report so readers know its here? 
I would loveeeeee to use this tool in the Uk!
 
Inhabit Project Content 
 
You’ve left ‘project title’ in the title bit just fyi 
Seems like another inspiring project!
Have you ever read the pdf - rocky road to transition? Some folks in England wrote it a few years back, might be interesting to you 
If it’s only professionals of a certain class that have access to design tools, what landscape is this likely to create? How can we popularise design tools like this? What are the power relationships at play? 
 
Pattern Language Elements
 
How do the bioregional aspects relate to decolonisation? Or indigenous communities in North America? 
 
Journal Entries 

 
Other
 
Missing skill flex assessment 
Output process relfections 
Condense number of pages? 
More images
Missing resource review
Missing self review 
Need to post on your mahara page