James M. Edwards commentary from my reading of Jorge Antonio Espinosa's OP5 (in process)  January 14, 2020.

This is a pure stream of consciousness note-taking from my reading of this OP as part of my peer evaluation process.  If something doesn't make sense, please ask me:  james@jamesmedwards.com

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Unique ToC presentation.  (Note: only “2. Pathway Overview” was hyperlinked)  I like the structure of this OP which creates a compelling narrative arc.  

Powerful opening abstract!  More an intro than an abstract.  There seem to be two parts: your story and context and then an abstract for each section.  Perhaps break into two parts?

Typo:  Queer Ecology demosntrates

important idea:  how academia is complicit in the destruction of ecosystems and breakdown of community

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